Sunday, 7 August 2011

Writing, Text types and tips: Report


  • TIPS:

  • Decide on your target reader - it will help you to choose the appropriate register.
  • Use rather formal language.
  • The distinguishing feature of any report is its layout. Reports are rather stiff , headings and sub-headings are vital.
    The body of your report has to be clearly divided into sections:

    • Introduction

      Make your introduction brief but clear. State the purpose of your report. Again, try to imagine that you are the only one who knows what is going on. Assume that everybody else needs explanation why you are writing this report. Repeat the question from the task but try to reword it.

      You may start like this:

      The aim/purpose of this report is toshow
      exemplify
      illustrate
      depict

      This reportis concerned with...
      is intended to...
      is written to analyse...
      deals with...
      relates to...
    • points in which you present your opinion

      You may use separate headings for advantages and disadvantages and describe them in two paragraphs or just present them in a list of points.

      The advantages/ disadvantages are as follow...
      The most convincing arguments in favour of ... are ...
      I would mention...as the most discouraging feature of...
      Here is the list of benefits...

    • evaluation/recommendation (if it is required by the question)
      I would recommend...because...
      I would not hesitate to recommend...
      I would suggest...
      In my opinion, it would be worth... +ing

    • conclusion/summary
      It is a good idea to repeat here why you are writing. It will show that you keep in mind the purpose of this report.

      In conclusion I would like to stress that...
      In my opinion...
      It is a fact that...
      It appears to/ seems to/ tends to
      There is no doubt that...
      Given this, it can be concluded that...
      Having proved/presented this, I would like to...

Sample answer:


Q: A group of American students is going to participate in a workshop organised by your school. They have never been in your town before so their tutor, Mr. Franklin, has asked you to write a report about places that are worth visiting in the area. Write a report describing the places and explain why you think they may be of any interest to the group.

To: Mr. Franklin
From: Francesca Wilson
Date: 12 November 20...
Subject: Places to visit during your stay in XX

Introduction:
This report is written to analyse places of interest that may be worth visiting by your group. I have called the tourist information office to check admission fees and opening hours that would be suitable for you.

Places to visit in XX
There are many places in the area which are worth recommending but unfortunately some of them are open to public only in summer peak season. However, there are two attractions that may be taken into consideration as they seem suitable for you:

1. The Dungeon is a very popular tourist attraction in XX. It is a former(overkill, drop it) jail tower from the 17th century. Today you can visit the prisoners' cells and see there a great collection of arms from previous centuries.

2. The Labyrinth is the place where you can have a lot fun. There is a number of dead-end corridors and some leading to the exit. You are supposed to find the way out in a given time. The place is open on weekends and there are big discounts for groups.

Conclusion:
I would not hesitate to recommend both of these places to your group. These attractions are well-known and popular among foreign visitors.


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Writing, Text types and tips: Articles


  • TIPS:

  • Just imagine you really write an article :-)
  • Think of an appropriate, eye-catching title.
  • You may refer to your title in your article - that will show that your text is coherent.
  • Do not use very formal language, however try to keep in mind where you are writing to (school newspaper; daily paper; magazine) and adjust your register.
  • Use questions and question tags.
  • Address your reader directly. Try to get him/her involved in what you are writing about.
  • Be careful with tenses. The article may refer to the present or to the past. Read carefully what you are expected to do in the task.
  • Focus on your introduction and conclusion - try to avoid one-sentence introduction/conclusion.
  • There are several ways in which you may begin your article:

    • a quotation or saying:

      'It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife' *.
      Detailed study of matrimonial offers given to magazines proves that this is still the case. 75 per cent of men ready to wear wedding rings declare financial independence and stability.

      * Jane Austen 'Pride and Prejudice'

    • criptic statement (you begin with a statement that is unclear for the reader):

      At last everything has been completed. The vans and trucks are loaded, equipment is checked and people are ready for their journey. It took over a year to prepare the whole action but for them it is just the beginning. The humanitarian aid is due to cross the border of our country today night at 2 a.m.
    • an anecdote:

      On 26 November 1922 Howard Carter and Lord Carnarvon entered the new discovered tomb in necropolis near Luxor. After 3000 years they were the first people who passed the 'blind gate' and saw the Pharao's treasure. The legend claims that the discovery was accompanied by several signs of gods' disapproval and that ignorance of European archeologists cost them their lives.
      Nowadays the famous legend attracts hordes of tourists. The ancient spell that was to protect prince's eternal life turned against him. The 'house' of his soul is devastated year after year.

    • a question:

      Have you ever imagined climbing the Mountain? You think it is not possible without months of previous training and preparations, right? Here you are wrong. All you need to get ready is... your bank account number. Mount Everest, called the Mountain by people who feel respect to it, is now offered as a tourist attraction for those who can afford such a trip.
  • Good ending is very crucial. It may be the summary of the points made in the article, the rhetorical question or the paraphrase of the statement made before.

Useful expressions:
  • Let's...
  • How about...?
  • Would you...?
  • I think you will agree that...
  • I hope you can imagine...
  • What would you do if...
  • All in all...
  • To sum up...
  • The conclusion is...

Sample answer:


Q: You work for the student newspaper. You have been asked to write an article about the theatre group that is going to make a performance in your town.

All in one - come and watch

Have you ever been asked to make a decision and choose only one thing out of many that you really like? I am sure you have. And then you always wonder what would have happened if you had chosen the alternative. Maybe you just missed something really special... You do not particularly like that feeling, do you? There is a group of young people who decided once that it is ridiculous to choose if you can have all in one - do you want to meet them? Actually, you will have a chance soon.

The Red Dragon Theatre Group is coming to our town next week. They will bring a lot of good sense of humour, music, dance, and anything you can think of that should appear on stage. Their main concern is to make you think, laugh, maybe cry a bit, but above all to give you a great time. I bet you will love them at first sight.

To make the long story short - you cannot miss this event! The group is going to perform in The Globe theatre and they have promised to meet your expectations. The choice is obvious this time... Simply, come and watch.


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Writing, Text types and tips: Informal Letter


TIPS:
  • Imagine that you write to a real friend of yours.

  • Friends usually have names ;-) so address him/her with a name: begin the letter with Dear Joey/ Tim /Rebecca, etc.
  • Begin your letter with some general statements. Refer to the letter you have received from your friend and thank him/her for it or apologise for the fact that you have not answered the last letter soon enough.
  • Use the proper register. The letter is supposed to be informal so you can use contractions, informal linking words like well, by the way, anyway, so, colloquial expressions, etc.
  • You can use more-conversation-like statements or questions in your letter: You know that I had this exam, right? You think he will be able to come to the party?
  • Use questions to ask about your friend - arrange the next meeting, send greetings to his/her friends and family, etc.
  • End your letter in informal way: Best wishes; Love; Regards. Instead of these phrases you may put two XXs. They indicate sending kisses ;-)

Useful expressions:
  • Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you.
  • Your last letter was a real surprise. It was so nice of you to remember about...
  • Thanks a lot for the information you've sent me in your last letter.
  • I've just received your letter. I'm so happy to hear that...
  • I'm sorry I haven't answered earlier but I was really busy with my school.
  • I'm sorry I haven't written for so long but...
  • Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
  • Well, that's all for now. Will talk to you soon.
  • Give my regards to your Mummy.
  • I hope we will be able to arrange a get-together.
  • Do write back as I'm waiting for the news from you.

Sample answer:


Q: You are abroad spending your holidays in a very exciting places you have always wanted to visit. The people you travel with are really nice so you enjoy their companionship. Write a letter to your friend describing what you have been doing so far and what you still plan to do.

Dear Amy,

Thank you a lot for your last letter. It was a nice surprise to hear from you. I'm sorry I haven't written to you earlier but I had to organise some things concerning my trip.

As you probably remember I've always wanted to visit some unusual places. And now, at last, off I went! But you'd never guess where I've chosen to spend my holiday. It's Antarctica! You would never think of it, would you? I'm so excited about the whole event!

The people I travel with are incredible. It's their fourteenth expedition there. They know every path in the snow by heart and they are very helpful. They share their knowledge and experience with me. Would you believe that here everything is different? You even need to set your tent in a special way. It's all very challenging. Tomorrow we plan to move further North so I may not be able to stay in touch for a while.

Anyway, I'd like to meet you when I get back. Hope you are enjoying your holiday. Do write back soon.

Love,
Becky

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